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O God, Have Mercy

Sun, a flaming ball in the sky Waterlogged lands have long gone dry The soil of the land, turned crusty Oh God, on us, have some mercy! Scorched in the fury of the sun, Are hot humid days, with no fun In sultry heat, men go crazy Oh God, on us, have some mercy! Thirst is the only thing we feel Under torrid heat our heads reel Without water, we feel dizzy Oh God, on us, have some mercy! Just as water saves life on land Your grace is needed for our mind Don’t leave our souls dry and hazy Oh God, on us, have some mercy! August.9.2022 A Kyrielle about Water Poetry Contest Sponsor- Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 8/10/2022 5:52:00 PM
A much needed prayer in these times of climate change all caused by mankind. We've got another heatwave hitting the UK in the next few days. Tom
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Date: 8/10/2022 2:27:00 AM
Sister Valsa G., Wonderful indeed. I was thinking of one yesterday ...divine-incidence? Unlike the variation on LORD HAVE MERCY, & the 8-syllable discipline . The topic, prescient. A call to arms
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Date: 8/9/2022 5:23:00 PM
This really is a magnificent piece of writing, dear Valsa. In point of fact, climate change threatens the basic fabric of the globe itself. Therefore, supplication is the final component of this lovely and useful oxymoron.
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Date: 8/9/2022 4:22:00 PM
Lovely piece penned so excellently Valsa, hope all is good with you, blessings,Gordon
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Date: 8/9/2022 11:25:00 AM
Truly, global warming is running the very essence of earth. So a relevant beautiful euphemism ends up with prayer. Splendid share... Hugs
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Date: 8/9/2022 10:47:00 AM
God does have a sense of humour, as those who thirst are rewarded with a mirage . . . . Aloha!
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Date: 8/9/2022 5:46:00 AM
Graceful poem, Valsa, longing for mercy in these days of intense heat. I like the rhythm of repeating line. Best to you.
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Date: 8/9/2022 12:52:00 AM
A pious prayer much appreciated dear Valsa. I need more than some mercy.
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