O Christmas Tree

O Christmas tree ho hum. Its scented needles unfurled. The trunk plopped down and watered. She sits, oh so still, like a good girl should. Days and days later, she’s showered in tinsel, dressed in lovely ornaments, gifted choice candy canes. The Winter sun is placed on her head, warming her heart. “Splendid,” she sighs, and then decadent wrapped boxes, drop at her feet on Xmas Eve, a twinkle in the gifter’s eye. 11/28/2018 Shadow Hamilton’s Contest

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:09:00 PM
Masterfully done, both in shape and letters/words. G.L. in the contest! Season's Best, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 9:34:00 PM
Happy Holidays, my friend!
Date: 11/30/2018 8:22:00 PM
Delightful - I love shape poetry! Best of luck in the contest...blessings to you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sherry!
Date: 11/30/2018 12:38:00 PM
Beautiful verse Kim, love the image of the tree. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/30/2018 11:22:00 AM
This is terrific! Love the shape and this phrase in particular: "She sits, oh so still, like a good girl should."
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Caren :) <3
Date: 11/30/2018 9:42:00 AM
Nice one Kim. Great shape and poetic story. Best wishes in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris!
Date: 11/30/2018 9:21:00 AM
Perfect in every way!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Date: 11/30/2018 9:12:00 AM
Lovely in so many ways, Kim. Bravo.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 11/30/2018 8:49:00 AM
This is so beautiful Kim. I am in awe of your creativity..splendidly done. A win in my books.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 8:58:00 AM
I so appreciate your comment, dear Poet!
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