O Beautiful Bellwort

yellow bells ringing everywhere ~ flowers singing a chorus of joy

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2009 9:43:00 AM

Like your Haiku. Sara

Abe Lopez

Date: 7/1/2009 7:46:00 PM

this my favorite form of writing to read. the visual here is very clear. awsome write.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2009 2:14:00 AM

I like your Haiku. It is very descriptive. Sara

Laurie Ginn

Date: 6/30/2009 7:26:00 PM

I kept trying to recall what a bellwort was but your poem says it all. Who on earth named such a beautiful poem such an awful name, probably Mr. Bellwort

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/30/2009 9:09:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Brian Strand

Date: 6/30/2009 3:02:00 AM

A resounding haiku Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Sandra Hudson

Date: 6/29/2009 8:26:00 PM

Makes me think of little boys in choir robes with their little mouths open, wait, what were we talking about? Oh yes, bells ringing, flowers singing, it's Christmas time, ding-dong, wait wrong season- man let me back outta here, before I really engage my brain-:))-AA

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/29/2009 8:04:00 PM

I can hear those bells..what a beautiful picture. Love, BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/29/2009 7:57:00 PM

A delightful, uplifting haiku, James! Many flowers have a sort of "bell" shape to them and when I was a child I used to try to make them ring. Funny the things you remember... Great work! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/29/2009 7:56:00 PM

I hear a song playing as I read this Jim...lovely opening to this piece.