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Nurturing Nature and Love

How I long for your GOLD locks to frolic in the breeze, And to flow to and fro, endlessly trying to me tease, And your incredible, smooth, transparent COMPLEXION Rosy from the glow of an ETERNAL blue HEAVEN, Home of our God Almighty, our Saviour and even Angels, rivers that flow through the flaxen filled fields, A LEASE between them of unspeakable treasures, Unthinkable, unbelievable, immeasurable pleasures That own nature, and nurture POSSESION of TEMPERATE Rose hedges UNTRIMMED, growing wild, soaking up sun Not looking for SHADE, BUDS that flower, comparable to none, How much longer, my lips to linger on yours forever! A SUMMER’S DAY REDO POETRY CONTEST. SPONSORED BY MICHELLLE FAULKNER 03.08.2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/30/2019 6:29:00 AM

A romantic and lovely entry deserving of your wonderful win Jennifer. Congratulations! xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/30/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thank-you Connie, and once again congrats. on your wonderful win, a beautiful write. Hugs, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/29/2019 3:18:00 PM

This is so passionate, Jennifer, thanks for entering my contest!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/30/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thanks Michelle, It was fun and I don't normally enter contest, but enjoyed the challenge. Hugs, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2019 8:03:00 PM

Oh, this is quite beautiful; good luck in the contest.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/6/2019 9:29:00 AM

Thank-you MLK - your love and nature poems and sonnets are just as beautiful if not more! Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/5/2019 5:51:00 AM

Beautifully done! Great job my friend. Your imagery blows me off my deck this morning into the yard, which made me glad.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/5/2019 8:32:00 AM

Thank you Caren what a lovely comment watch out now, you don't want to land on your petootie! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/4/2019 7:25:00 AM

Summer is the time for nature and romance to come together. Nicely written, Jenn. I like your new pic! Best of luck. Hugs, John

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/4/2019 5:34:00 PM

Quite so - they are allies and at a cool afternoon picnic in natures fields will heighten the senses and awake the soul. Glad you liked my new pic thought I would go short, shortest i've ever been. Im told It's cute and cheeky! Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/3/2019 11:30:00 PM

Hello Jennifer … a nice blending of passions and desires. Well done Jennifer - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/4/2019 5:28:00 PM

Thank-you Lindsay - glad you enjoyed - passion and desires blend together with nature, like crackers and cheese ! Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/3/2019 10:45:00 PM

Romantic blending of nature and passion, Jennifer. Very nice! :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/5/2019 8:43:00 AM

Hi Gershon, Yup, guess they always go hand in hand - great comment! Hugs and blessings, Jenny.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2019 4:26:00 PM

such warm sentiments which bloom within the page, jen... beautifully penned!...huggs

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/4/2019 5:23:00 PM

Thank-you Nette, a very sweet and kind comment - hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/3/2019 3:03:00 PM

An explosion of emotions..a summer love song intertwined with Shakespeare's chosen words..excellent rendering Jennifer evocative of both summer and romance. You easily incorporated those uncooperative words into a beautiful piece..much enjoyed. All the best for a superb win, my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/4/2019 5:22:00 PM

Thank-you Vijay, I always look forward to your comments - they are all, each and every one of them so soothing kind and perceptive in your understanding and awareness. This comment means a lot to me, as this is my first attempt at this style of poetry - i'm proud you enjoyed it. Hugs Jennifer.