Numbness:

Now I am an Uncle, Never been one before. Newborns are always grand, Nonetheless, I have a Niece, Macy is her birth Name, how could she be a Nuisance? She looks like me! 30~April~2017 For Pleiades N contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman.

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Probir Gupta

Date: 5/15/2017 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations, W W ... a wonderful write ...

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/13/2017 9:06:00 PM

A sweet write about becoming an uncle. Love how you ended it! Congrats on your win, White Wolf! Blessings, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2017 12:10:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2017 3:11:00 PM

What a cool way to do the N contest, White Wolf. you used Numbness more in a positive way than negative and that 's GREAT

White Wolf
Date: 5/1/2017 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2017 1:09:00 PM

- I guess she's beautiful, W.W. - Lovely poem - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf
Date: 5/1/2017 7:27:00 PM

Haha, oh she is that! Thanks, Anne-Lise /|\

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/1/2017 10:27:00 AM

Hello White Wolf. Congratulations on being an uncle. I love being an aunt. Your theme is wonderful. The format is in great execution. Your ending line gives a smile and chuckle. Well done entirely. Good luck with the contest.

White Wolf
Date: 5/1/2017 7:26:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Lisa /|\