Numbness:

Now I am an Uncle,

Never been one before.

Newborns are always grand,

Nonetheless, I have a 

Niece, Macy is her birth

Name, how could she be a

Nuisance? She looks like me!

30~April~2017

For Pleiades N contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gupta Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations, W W ... a wonderful write ...
Merryman Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 9:06 PM
A sweet write about becoming an uncle. Love how you ended it! Congrats on your win, White Wolf! Blessings, Kim
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:10 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 3:11 PM
What a cool way to do the N contest, White Wolf. you used Numbness more in a positive way than negative and that 's GREAT
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, Andrea /|\
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:09 PM
- I guess she's beautiful, W.W. - Lovely poem - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Haha, oh she is that! Thanks, Anne-Lise /|\
Ricci Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Hello White Wolf. Congratulations on being an uncle. I love being an aunt. Your theme is wonderful. The format is in great execution. Your ending line gives a smile and chuckle. Well done entirely. Good luck with the contest.
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Thanks a bunch, Lisa /|\
Hoffman Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Made me smile with your nice witty tribute to your newborn niece~G/L in the contest!~Che :)
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Cheryl /|\
Trifiatis Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 4:05 AM
Dazzling Pleiades my friend, WW! A 7+ for sure you deserve! Good luck!
Wolf Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 4:08 AM
Thank you kindly, Demetrios /|\
White Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 3:44 AM
I like your Pleiades Budgie, good luck in the contest
Wolf Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 3:48 AM
Thanks mate /|\
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