Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Numb Mondays of Rain

Oh, numb Mondays of soul! 
My head  reels on thuds of workload ‘s gong
these leaden files weigh on drooping arms 
as  pewter rainfall gushes along,
to jangle wired veins of  my frayed nerves:
here, stuffed hours ache for a  joyful trot--
oh, numb Mondays of soul!
Your drenched blossoms, they answer me not?

The train packs an array of wet caps                    
impoverished  shadows pleading rest,
more agitated than a gale's taps …
so I  run to find my own reprieve
trying to prance on evening's dewed beat;
oh, numb Mondays of soul!
Give me tunes, my hushaby’s  retreat. 


Rainy Days and Mondays Contest
For Silent One   2/22/2018

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Ravindra K Kapoor February 25, 2018 at 7:46 AM You have very nicely penned the running down feelings of a work weighted Monday which often becomes more irritating with gushes of rainy winds. A beautiful write dear friend with a very suitable win in silent one's contest. Congrats with love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor

Ravi Sathasivam February 25, 2018 at 7:38 AM Excellent. Great imagery and emotions write. Enjoyed reading it.

Line Gauthier February 24, 2018 at 7:17 PM Congrats on your win, nette. Sweet poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 23, 2018 at 6:18 AM - Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One February 23, 2018 at 6:06 AM Deep and emotive take on the contest Nette.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Constance La France February 22, 2018 at 7:23 PM Nette, a wonderful write for the contest. Hope all is well with you ?

Joseph May February 21, 2018 at 4:33 PM Very nicely penned Nette...best wishes

Frederic Parker February 21, 2018 at 4:33 PM I hope the rest of your week is not so heavy laden, well done

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2018 at 3:39 PM Perfection, Nette!! Wonderful poetry!

Heidi Sands February 21, 2018 at 3:04 PM Well written Nette! I like how you ended it too :) Good luck in the contest !

Vijay Pandit February 21, 2018 at 3:01 PM You captured the essence of dreadful rainy Mondays. Well written, nette. Best for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2018 at 2:06 PM - I read this with a smile, Nette .... I thought you loved rain :) - Great done - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)