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Numb Mondays of Rain

Oh, numb Mondays of soul! My head reels on thuds of workload ‘s gong these leaden files weigh on drooping arms as pewter rainfall gushes along, to jangle wired veins of my frayed nerves: here, stuffed hours ache for a joyful trot-- oh, numb Mondays of soul! Your drenched blossoms, they answer me not? The train packs an array of wet caps impoverished shadows pleading rest, more agitated than a gale's taps … so I run to find my own reprieve trying to prance on evening's dewed beat; oh, numb Mondays of soul! Give me tunes, my hushaby’s retreat. Rainy Days and Mondays Contest For Silent One 2/22/2018

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Date: 2/25/2018 7:46:00 AM
You have very nicely penned the running down feelings of a work weighted Monday which often becomes more irritating with gushes of rainy winds. A beautiful write dear friend with a very suitable win in silent one's contest. Congrats with love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:38:00 AM
Excellent. Great imagery and emotions write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/24/2018 7:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Sweet poem.
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:06:00 AM
Deep and emotive take on the contest Nette.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/22/2018 7:23:00 PM
Nette, a wonderful write for the contest. Hope all is well with you ?
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Date: 2/21/2018 4:33:00 PM
Very nicely penned Nette...best wishes
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Date: 2/21/2018 4:33:00 PM
I hope the rest of your week is not so heavy laden, well done
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Date: 2/21/2018 3:39:00 PM
Perfection, Nette!! Wonderful poetry!
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Date: 2/21/2018 3:04:00 PM
Well written Nette! I like how you ended it too :) Good luck in the contest !
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Date: 2/21/2018 3:01:00 PM
You captured the essence of dreadful rainy Mondays. Well written, nette. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/21/2018 2:06:00 PM
- I read this with a smile, Nette .... I thought you loved rain :) - Great done - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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