Numb As a Wound-Ii

I am sitting in my Dorchester lair,
Behind the door I feel your lovely mien,
The time my poetic muse is in the air,
You look so much real as life, amore mia.

When I am surfing on the internet,
You are there in my click I envisage,
When I initiate to scribe a sonnet,
I could see you embossed on the pages.

Sighing, wry face, the lips as a dry leaf,
Your green blue deep eyes upraised fully,
Neither the death kills me, nor does the life,
Your silence always eats my soul and body.

Numb as a disease, I die of a thought,
Do not you sense the same as I ought do?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Quintero Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Excellent.....love the thoughts portrayed. - Jodie
Brown Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 3:07 AM
Wow another feature. Congrats again DR. Love, Carol
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May 11, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Creative view on writing. So interesting! Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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May 11, 2010 at 3:33 AM
Pondering a past...todays, live mysteriously. Your writes are full, Dr. R. And very interesting to the imagination of a brown-eyed girl! God be with you now and through forever. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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May 10, 2010 at 1:59 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
Sweetheart Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. another excellent choice to share with us all..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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May 9, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Dr Ram >> James
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May 7, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Wow this is so beautiful.. awesome write..a pleasure to read........Charma
Murphy Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 8:58 AM
very good write wish you the best in your life have a great weekend faleshia
Strand Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian
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May 7, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Very moving, Dr. Ram. The pain comes through strongly in your sad words. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 5:51 AM
This penetrated my soul ..its a very deep read.. so emotional and intense Dr. Ram.. sounds like a heart is breaking ... this is what poetry is all about ..the reader feeling the writer.. luv. from the "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 4:50 AM
That would be a horrible death to die of thought...Keep the creative pen flowing.Thanks for stopping by and reading and commenting on my work.."The Shadow Cast"..Sara
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May 7, 2010 at 3:51 AM
Sad and moving poem, enjoyed
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