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traveling between parallel realities

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poem written for and submitted to “1405 Single Footle Poetry Contest,” Brian Strand, sponsor, August 20, 2025.

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Déjà vu, a strange, fleeting sensation—moment eerily familiar,
Parallel realities bleed into one another, align, and then bewilder.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/21/2025 7:02:00 PM

enjoyed this micro brevity ~

John Fleming

Date: 8/21/2025 12:14:00 PM

Something inexplicable summed up very succinctly, Sara. And that in itself is a strange contradiction. Excellent work! :) john

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/21/2025 5:29:00 PM

thanks for your kind comments and for the 'contradiction' insight! well said, Sara

Deb M

Date: 8/21/2025 12:48:00 AM

So true and well stated Sara! Debx Love the picture!!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/21/2025 2:46:00 AM

thanks for visiting, Deb. Good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind words. And I liked the picture too, hugs, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 8/20/2025 10:26:00 PM

Whoa! Excellent poetry, Sara. I hope this one is for a contest. Good luck if it is. Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/21/2025 2:45:00 AM

whoa! Thank you, dear hubby. Yep, for a contest and my first Footle! hugs back, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/20/2025 6:31:00 PM

A perfectly lined up two lines, must be a winner for sure

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/21/2025 2:44:00 AM

awww, thank you sweet Rose! I appreciate your vote of confidence!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/20/2025 3:03:00 PM

Could be...parallel realities? Tapping into Divine Mind? A thought provoking write.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/20/2025 5:15:00 PM

thanks for visiting, Joe, and for sharing your thoughts that now have me thinking some more :-) enjoy your evening, Sara