nuances

For the epiphany, this Sunday at thirteen
I wanted a cake of kings,
I have a bakery across the street from my house
hello I would like a galette of kings,
Apple or frangipane? Waw?
I didn’t ask for an apple pie!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/25/2025 7:27:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this delectable poem, Yann. Thanks for sharing. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/9/2025 8:22:00 PM

Sounds delicious! I love how you delight in such things!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/7/2025 4:38:00 AM

This is so beautifully written, i tried apple pie recently, but didnt like it but i do hope i can try another one that may be nice! Im glad theres no bakery near my home as i will probably havr chocolate croissants everyday then, pleasure reading this. Hope 2025 treats you and your loved ones kind sending you light always

Ink Empress
Date: 1/8/2025 2:19:00 AM

Ah im so sorry did not mean to upset you, you are very lucky to have a bakery nearby, if you are not like me a chocoholic. I just am trying to cut down more on sugar this year: enjoy having a bakery! Ofcourse it is convenient . Sending you light

Yann Rolland
Date: 1/7/2025 4:28:00 PM

thanks a lot IE, your comment is "upsetting" may be i am an unfortunate guy, to have a bakery the other side of the street take care