Nr Rain, Rain, Go Away

Rain, rain, go away Come again another day Little Abbie wants an ice cream cone School's closed, you see, and she’s stuck at home! Watching happy ducks in the pond as they swim And her red sand pail you've filled to the rim! Rain, rain, you’re so vain Never show your face again! ~*~
For: Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/1/2013 3:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win.....Sara
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Date: 3/31/2013 3:53:00 PM
so glad to see this was a winner, Annalise - love it
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:55:00 AM
A wonderful write. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/29/2013 8:14:00 PM
Annalise, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA
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Date: 3/29/2013 4:39:00 PM
I really like yours, Annalise. I have to tell you one reason it is one of my favorites on the list. When I was one year old,, my mother said that I used to stare out the window saying, "rain rain go away, little Andie wants to play." (I hated my baby years in Washington state. it is a very dreary place to grow up)
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Date: 3/29/2013 12:56:00 PM
Hi and congratulations on your win Annalise xx
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Date: 3/29/2013 12:49:00 PM
Great rewrite of a NR with a different twist !! Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win and thanks for entering my contest !!
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Date: 3/28/2013 2:50:00 AM
Hey Annalise, hope you had a brilliant week this far. This made me smile this morning. A blessed Easter to you. love you Wilma
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Date: 3/26/2013 4:33:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one..You chose a great one to do your NR to ..I like the flow of this one...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/26/2013 10:45:00 AM
love this...
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Date: 3/25/2013 4:39:00 PM
nicely penned Annalise...winning wishes
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Date: 3/25/2013 8:56:00 AM
Sweeter than sweet, my dear Annalise! A winner for sure... you can take that to the bank! Love ya! Hugs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 3/25/2013 4:04:00 AM
Annalise, luck in contest ! - I love it, and hope Debra will to ! - Wishing you a lovely Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/25/2013 2:53:00 AM
Annalise ha I love this, good luck...David
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Date: 3/24/2013 9:44:00 PM
Very cute...sounds like a winner....good luck
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