Now What

Every day is a fight it always ends in war.

I remember all of the broken dreams that you promised me before. 

 

Now I am cracked far beyond repair.

my feelings I once told you but now I wouldn't dare.

 All the words once spoken now I wouldn't say

you are working on yourself but you are pushing me away

 

You told me that you needed me- I was a gift from up above,

why is it if you need me that I don't feel any love?

You tell me just to trust you and love will set me free,

I see you getting better but what's happening to me?

 

So I am just alone, me myself and I,

I try to focus on all of the good  but all I do is cry.

Tears for what we once had and some for what could have been,

I plea for you to care for me but you think that I am being mean.

 

This must be what love is- I wish it wasn't true.

I hope that you can believe in me because I will always believe in you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/12/2013 12:03:00 PM
Alyssa, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win... very sad but thought provoking...
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Date: 1/11/2013 3:20:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/10/2013 8:31:00 PM
Sad little sentiments. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/10/2013 5:54:00 PM
Alyssa, nice to see you on Susan's winning list... always~ PD
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Date: 1/2/2013 6:53:00 PM
sad write of failing love,so much of this is happening these days seems like people are just interested in themselves,hope things work out for you,welcome to the Soup have a happy new year
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:49:00 PM
Welcome to Soup! If you need any help please don't hesitate to ask...Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2013 10:50:00 AM
great poem... touchy
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Date: 1/2/2013 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful piece of work, you told this story better than I have ever heard it before.
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Date: 1/2/2013 12:28:00 AM
I hope this person makes as much time for you as you are for him. Good poem - JH
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