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Now Those Were Poetry

Not certain that poetry
should be described as 
much as written – I mean, 
to write about a star, 
is one thing...but to absorb 
and likely radiate seems the 
brighter reason for Light; 

myself feeling that we are 
better a-lined with creation 
when less fanfare and greater 
in the art of becoming – (no
poet writes poetry...but writes
in a way prompting the reader 
to exclaim: Now that’s
poetry!)

I mean, does a rose 
need read some other blossom 
before its own singularity? 

And surely a dramatic sky 
and awe inspiring mountain 
summit, knew how before 
mixing pigments, counting grains,
measuring real-estate, then
estimating a proper footing – 

other than for inspiration
needing no prior thought as 
to what came first or if solid
foundations must be ascribed 
before additions made – 

accepting as fact, that we
are somehow all linked, and 
each builds upon the surface of
a wondrous other…

thus poetry should
be simple, spontaneous…
which has nothing to do with 
lack of complexity, or the long
and often tedious dedication 
going into works – 

I say only that poetry 
should not be strained...
which is what happens
when lacking truth, and needing
excess filling or stretching if to
be recognized. 

  Excluding
grand-dad’s fish tales – Now 
those were 
Poetry!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/16/2020 8:54:00 PM
Ha, ha! I love this, Joe! The wonderful irony is that you've employed a barrel full of cerebral complexity to advocate for simple presentation, without unnecessary embellishment! Lovely done! Right into my FAVES! Thank you! Cheers, Gershon
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/17/2020 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon; you made my day friend!!
Date: 7/5/2020 4:31:00 PM
Oh ok... I didn't understand what need read referred to... I agree... I rarely read poetry, only on here do I read occasionally... We should always be true to ourselves..
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Date: 7/5/2020 2:15:00 PM
I totally agree... Write what your heart desires... I was a bit confused withe the 2nd line in the 3rd stanza...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/5/2020 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Si; 2nd line you refer to. I just think we do not have to learn from others, see their example to learn who we are...I believe such understanding is already inside of us. Before we come to this earth. Maybe I'm wrong.... Just my way of explaining to my satisfaction some of the mystery of becoming.

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