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Now Those Were Poetry

Not certain that poetry should be described as much as written – I mean, to write about a star, is one thing...but to absorb and likely radiate seems the brighter reason for Light; myself feeling that we are better a-lined with creation when less fanfare and greater in the art of becoming – (no poet writes poetry...but writes in a way prompting the reader to exclaim: Now that’s poetry!) I mean, does a rose need read some other blossom before its own singularity? And surely a dramatic sky and awe inspiring mountain summit, knew how before mixing pigments, counting grains, measuring real-estate, then estimating a proper footing – other than for inspiration needing no prior thought as to what came first or if solid foundations must be ascribed before additions made – accepting as fact, that we are somehow all linked, and each builds upon the surface of a wondrous other… thus poetry should be simple, spontaneous… which has nothing to do with lack of complexity, or the long and often tedious dedication going into works – I say only that poetry should not be strained... which is what happens when lacking truth, and needing excess filling or stretching if to be recognized. Excluding grand-dad’s fish tales – Now those were Poetry!

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Date: 7/16/2020 8:54:00 PM
Ha, ha! I love this, Joe! The wonderful irony is that you've employed a barrel full of cerebral complexity to advocate for simple presentation, without unnecessary embellishment! Lovely done! Right into my FAVES! Thank you! Cheers, Gershon
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/17/2020 9:12:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon; you made my day friend!!
Date: 7/5/2020 4:31:00 PM
Oh ok... I didn't understand what need read referred to... I agree... I rarely read poetry, only on here do I read occasionally... We should always be true to ourselves..
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Date: 7/5/2020 2:15:00 PM
I totally agree... Write what your heart desires... I was a bit confused withe the 2nd line in the 3rd stanza...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/5/2020 4:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Si; 2nd line you refer to. I just think we do not have to learn from others, see their example to learn who we are...I believe such understanding is already inside of us. Before we come to this earth. Maybe I'm wrong.... Just my way of explaining to my satisfaction some of the mystery of becoming.

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