Now This Is Real Pressure

Doctors spread this message about
Drink gallons of water they tout
To soften this dose
Know where bathrooms are close
Since what's in must often come out!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 10:01 PM
I try to drink lots of water or juice ;}
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 8:25 PM
now how the heck did I ever miss a this one?? I love it . Thanks for your kind remark today and I sure hope to see many more posts by YOU.
Trifiatis Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 11:05 AM
I like this. It made me smile! All your writings are insightful! Thank you for yor comment on UNLESS. I corrected it for it was not what you thought. My mistake. I have sent an explicatory message. Thank you again!
Cheesman Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 6:04 PM
hehe! Thank you for your humour Duke.....think i need to read some more - Shaz
A   Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Duke, well... yes it is hard to consume... LOL...good limerick, enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
Kendrick Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Water is good though..Just don't consume too much..Would not want you to get in trouble for indecent exposure..Sara
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 6:45 PM
Love this Limerick. Very witty.
Andresen Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Duke, I love your humor. - Well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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