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Now They Reside In the Deep South

her boobies had sagged
two boulders in a hammock
she is stony faced


03~08~15
Contest -Make me chuckle with a Haiku/Senyru#1 - PD

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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March 10, 2015 at 4:13 PM

Haha, so funny Jan. Oh my, it's been an evening of laughs on the Soup, mainly down to your wit Jan. Wishing this funny poem all the best in the contest, hugs//James xx

March 10, 2015 at 4:16 PM

I do try and write with humour whenever I can James - just hope PD likes my style:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

March 10, 2015 at 9:15 AM

Ha ha,snort chuckle chuckle!

March 10, 2015 at 11:38 AM

Glad I made you smile Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2015 at 4:37 PM

good one. i hope she sees the picture!! I think I should name mine a senryu. But in any even , haiku are sometimes called same as senryu. I see you did a horse poem for Nette. I too chose the horse picture. I am seeing that the contests are all filling really fast and I am so mad because I am at school and have no way to get to my files and post poems for the contests almost closing.. Uggggg.

March 10, 2015 at 2:05 AM

Thanks for dropping by hope you get to post your poems in time:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 9, 2015 at 4:05 PM

Too funny, Jan! Love it! Perfect for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

March 10, 2015 at 2:05 AM

thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 9, 2015 at 9:46 AM

however-she is still beautiful, as are your works

March 9, 2015 at 9:55 AM

Thanks Gary:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 9, 2015 at 9:24 AM

A great senryu with a laughing humour beautifully done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

March 9, 2015 at 9:54 AM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

March 8, 2015 at 7:32 PM

lol Linda will love this Jan gl in contest 7 hugs

March 9, 2015 at 9:54 AM

I hope so Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 8, 2015 at 7:19 PM

This is one of the most funny poems I've seen in just a few short verses, Jan! Hilarious!! :D

March 9, 2015 at 9:53 AM

Thanks Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 8, 2015 at 4:51 PM

great work! you got a chuckle out of me. I just do not know how you keep coming up with such fantastic humour. love Shane xxx

March 8, 2015 at 5:06 PM

I have no idea where the word failed came from. You are brilliant.

March 8, 2015 at 5:02 PM

Thanks Shane - think I am a failed comedienne at heart lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 8, 2015 at 4:48 PM

Deep humour Jan...lol...hugs Tim

March 8, 2015 at 5:01 PM

Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

March 8, 2015 at 12:01 PM

Your concepts are always delightful Glad you still have your sense of the ridiculous intact. Wish I could think like you LOL Hugs Edith

March 8, 2015 at 12:08 PM

Thanks Mama Bear:-) Just hope PD finds it funny:-) Hugs Jan xxx

March 8, 2015 at 11:14 AM

You wondered if it were a senryu: it is. I like it a lot. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Julia, xx

March 8, 2015 at 11:35 AM

Thanks Julia - we can pen either a senryu or a haiku and I thought it was ok:-) Hugs Jan xx

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