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I understand that in your mindset
You think you’re entitled to judge me
Though you know nothing of my life

My youth is gone and spent
I couldn't solve the problems of the world
I don't think I even made a dent

I loved those who surrounded me
In whatever way I could
I'm a woman so it was in my nature 

I catered to a million bosses
I'm exhausted yes it's true but now
It’s finally time I listen to the boss within

How much time I have 
I guess I’ll never know but
I’m aiming to savor every single minute

I'm a creator first and foremost
And while I see the end approaching
I still have so much more to say

So forgive me if I cut you off 
Or if I don't sound interested
It’s just that precious time is fleeting
 
I won’t engage when talking politics
I've heard enough about injustices 
To last me a couple lifetimes 

I’ve earned the right to sit back
Let others step up and try their utmost
To solve the travesties of the world

I'm getting old and time for me is ticking
I may be selfish but what time I may have left 
Is mine to focus on creating                            



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on June 1, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (JUN 3) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on May 18, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/2/2021 10:11:00 PM
I could not agree more!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/2/2021 10:22:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy ~
Date: 6/2/2021 4:13:00 PM
Congratulation on your top contest win. You deserve it with a charming penned poem, blessings, and regards. Lasaad
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Date: 6/2/2021 10:22:00 PM
Thanks, Lasaad. Much appreciated ~
Date: 5/19/2021 9:21:00 AM
"time for me is ticking" too. Great write, Line. It touched me.
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Date: 5/20/2021 7:45:00 AM
We've got to make the most of the time we are given ~
Date: 5/19/2021 5:48:00 AM
We've given it our best shot line, you're right, time for someone younger to take the reins, and good luck to them, they'll need it. Tom
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Date: 5/20/2021 7:45:00 AM
For sure ~ thanks, Tom
Date: 5/19/2021 5:47:00 AM
Beautiful write and outlook. I enjoyed so much. A blessing to read. Love it. God bless you always, Line. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/20/2021 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Gina. Have a lovely day ~
Date: 5/18/2021 8:50:00 PM
Wonderful, honest writing, Line. Sometimes I feel exactly the same way. We tried to solve the world's problems to no avail, it seems. Now it's time for the previous generation to take a whack at them. They don't need my advice; wouldn't heed it anyway!
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Date: 5/19/2021 5:13:00 AM
Yes, the next generation's turn ~
Date: 5/18/2021 8:48:00 PM
Love this from the premise to the promise, Line. (Though I can't say I agree totally with the title, young lady!). Go for it! Dreams and Dreamland, Gershon
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Date: 5/19/2021 5:14:00 AM
LOL ~ trying to get used to the idea and all the benefits that come with it.

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