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Now My Wings Can Soar In the Sky

a caterpillar in leaf's hold spins within walls of brownish-gold emerges in whispering spry now my wings can soar in the sky landing within fields of soft white pure beauty beneath dawn's mid-light close my eyes...malinger in sigh now my wings can soar in the sky you unfold in shadows of mind memories of life and death twined you sussurrate as death draws nigh now my wings can soar in the sky spirals of emotion now fall as i see you within death's call murmur with night a last goodbye now my wings can soar in the sky july 13, 2019

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Constance La France

Date: 7/19/2019 9:58:00 AM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this lovely write, well done!

John Gondolf

Date: 7/17/2019 10:33:00 AM

Sandy, back to say congrats on your win for this wonderful poem. I enjoyed re-reading it again. All the best my friend. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/18/2019 9:22:00 AM

Thank you....hugs

Joseph May

Date: 7/17/2019 6:50:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sandra..

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/18/2019 9:22:00 AM

Thank you :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/16/2019 8:29:00 PM

Back to say congrats on your placement!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/17/2019 6:16:00 AM

Thank you Brenda :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/14/2019 10:13:00 PM

Wow Sandra this is so well written! Good luck in the contest it's sure to be a winner!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/15/2019 5:06:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Brenda! :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2019 7:11:00 PM

So well-done within--and without--the contest. Those are the best ones. Wonderful! ~ gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/14/2019 8:07:00 PM

Thank you... this one was a fun write, it took a little while to pick a refrain that i could take off with...then it just sort of came to me.... :) hugs

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/14/2019 8:56:00 AM

Beautiful wings, skies and everything. Good luck in contest, Sandra)

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/14/2019 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Kurt, it was a fun write~! :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/14/2019 8:11:00 AM

Flap flap, love it! I think you captured the beauty.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/14/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Rick...this one spoke to me in depths....aren't most butterflies and angels beautiful? hugs :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2019 10:55:00 AM

Wondrous imagery that truly helps one's soul soar in the sky , dear, Sandra! Good luck!

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/13/2019 11:04:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for you kind comment :) hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 7/13/2019 10:23:00 AM

Wow, Sandy this is a beautiful poem and a great entry for the contest. I haven't written one yet but perhaps this weekend. Best of luck my friend. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/13/2019 10:28:00 AM

Thank you John...my muse has been fickle, I set out to write for a contest and she goes with a different one. I was pleased with this one today when it came to me! Hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 7/13/2019 8:54:00 AM

Wow, this is beautiful Sandy, I see another win with this one, love the refrain! Great vocab too sussurrate malinger great words.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/13/2019 9:00:00 AM

Thank you John, this one appealed most to me of the four refrains perhaps because it was easier to work with for me ! I didn't want to over use any words so needed to somehow tie the refrain in without it sounding out of place! I appreciate your comment and visit, especially because rhyme is more difficult for me! :) hugs