~now His Friends Had Gone~

Fingertips traced goodnight kiss,
wiping away his indifference
from her lips,

and in the whisper of his eyes
she saw unfettered plea,
“Please greet the dawn with me”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 17, 2008 at 6:23 AM
I like it alot...lovely write...tc...Sara...
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