NOW

Now

The landscape stretches 
 Her range out beyond sight
While notably 
Visible along the horizon 
   to the left and right,

She moves on away 
Dancing 
Into the traveling dimensions 
      of time 
Toward realms
Where language has yet to be
Any more than merely humming —
  And 
Any signals, any gestures of need
Proceed from essence — unleashed —
Feelings
Fleeing being bound…

To attach
To Sounds’ quivering frequencies
Streaming along their escape routes 
— always forward, outward
Prime to crisscross the heavens… 

Passing over fears’ attempts to reign…

Now, arrows fly fleetly
Following
The dancing landscape
Toward some unknown end points
Where Love outlasts all.




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(* 1 Cor. 13: 8- 12)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 5:18 PM
Sally, it's a privilege to read your work. You have a unique way to describe the situation we find ourselves facing as human beings. I read the comments you made below. You are really deep! Smiles!
George Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 9:00 PM
This poem I feel is deeply metaphorical. Time stretches endlessly and the vistas too keep stretching. But the onward movement progresses towards a realm where there is no language except the language of love. I too wait to reach that realm. Great poetry and rich use of metaphors. So glad to see you back dear Sally!
Bayles Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 8:29 AM
A grand journey, indeed, and timeless. The ending is great.
Eslinger Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 5:18 PM
,ike, thanks for gifting me a smile.
One Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 10:39 AM
Your poem reads like a metaphysical journey, exploring themes of love, freedom, and transcending earthly limitations. The landscape itself becomes a symbol of the spirit or soul, stretching beyond sight, moving toward an unknown yet purposeful destination. Through fluid language, vibrant sound imagery, and the evocation of expansive space, the poem captures a longing for union with something timeless and unbound. It offers a hopeful vision of moving through and beyond fear, guided by love, an enduring force that transcends all.
Eslinger Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Well, Silent, you got it! The only point i’d add is, IMHO the “crisis” appears now to be worldwide, masses looking toward their familiar horizons (within &without) and feeling lost…(culturally, politically, economically, socially) lost… with, by faith a way to hold onto some community. Love U for your thoughts!
Read Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 7:04 AM
Hi Sally I enjoyed reading your poem, the last line says it all, have a lovely weekend. Xx
Eslinger Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 5:54 PM
Thanks a lot, John, for reading & your comment! Hugs…
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 5:22 PM
Hello Sally, It sounds like a dream to me. I enjoyed this poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Hello Sally, okay , i won't answer that. LOL. Hugs. /Darlene/
Eslinger Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 5:58 PM
Hi, Darlene, perhaps it describes a dream about reality? haha don’t amswer that. Haha. xoxo
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 12:42 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Now" write. Have a blessed weekend..........
Eslinger Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Thanks, dear Paula, you too! xox
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