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November's Silver Lining

huddle of hoodies
                                        crests flashing
                              the dark river's grace



*Hooded Mergansers

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Sherry Asbury

November 16, 2018 at 9:00 PM

Wonderful portrait of fall. Can see them floating and hear them murmuring...great work here!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 16, 2018 at 9:05 PM

Thank you Sherry :) xomo!

John Michaels

November 15, 2018 at 10:32 AM

Echoing comments below - have learnt something new!! Nicely-penned, Maureen. Regards, John.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 15, 2018 at 11:10 AM

Thank you John :) xomo

Bernard Chan

November 14, 2018 at 11:50 PM

Lively and lovely imagery, and Susan is right, the title is icing on the ducks : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 15, 2018 at 8:19 AM

Giggles ;) thank you my friend, xomo

Susan Ashley

November 13, 2018 at 9:02 AM

Gorgeous penning Mo, I love the title too. I think these ducks are adorable. Warmest wishes lovely.. ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 13, 2018 at 9:56 AM

They are! :)) Thank you Lovely! xomo <3

Jan Allison

November 13, 2018 at 3:35 AM

I've learned a new meaning to hoodies and this one is much nicer than the clothing!:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 13, 2018 at 8:02 AM

It's a birders term of endearment ;) xomo!

Ravi Sathasivam

November 13, 2018 at 1:07 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 13, 2018 at 8:01 AM

Thank you Ravi :) xomo

Ilene Bauer

November 12, 2018 at 6:45 PM

beautifully written, maureen! i enjoyed...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 13, 2018 at 8:01 AM

Thank you Ilene! :) xomo

Michelle Faulkner

November 12, 2018 at 4:32 PM

Very picturesque, Maureen (thanks for the note about the bird type, at first I was thinking of the jackets with hoods you wear!)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 13, 2018 at 7:59 AM

They do look a little like huddling 'hood'lums ;) thank you! :) xomo

Tim Smith

November 12, 2018 at 2:16 PM

I really need to get my mind out of the gutter lol...I was picturing you wearing a hoodie flashing me ...oops hehe

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 13, 2018 at 7:53 AM

Heh heh, been known to do that ;)

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