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November's Silver Lining

huddle of hoodies
                                        crests flashing
                              the dark river's grace



*Hooded Mergansers

autumnbirdnovemberhaiku

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Sherry Asbury

Date: 11/16/2018 9:00:00 PM

Wonderful portrait of fall. Can see them floating and hear them murmuring...great work here!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/16/2018 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Sherry :) xomo!

John Michaels

Date: 11/15/2018 10:32:00 AM

Echoing comments below - have learnt something new!! Nicely-penned, Maureen. Regards, John.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/15/2018 11:10:00 AM

Thank you John :) xomo

Bernard Chan

Date: 11/14/2018 11:50:00 PM

Lively and lovely imagery, and Susan is right, the title is icing on the ducks : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/15/2018 8:19:00 AM

Giggles ;) thank you my friend, xomo

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/13/2018 9:02:00 AM

Gorgeous penning Mo, I love the title too. I think these ducks are adorable. Warmest wishes lovely.. ~Susan

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/13/2018 9:56:00 AM

They are! :)) Thank you Lovely! xomo <3

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2018 3:35:00 AM

I've learned a new meaning to hoodies and this one is much nicer than the clothing!:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/13/2018 8:02:00 AM

It's a birders term of endearment ;) xomo!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/13/2018 1:07:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/13/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Ravi :) xomo

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/12/2018 6:45:00 PM

beautifully written, maureen! i enjoyed...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/13/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Ilene! :) xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/12/2018 4:32:00 PM

Very picturesque, Maureen (thanks for the note about the bird type, at first I was thinking of the jackets with hoods you wear!)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/13/2018 7:59:00 AM

They do look a little like huddling 'hood'lums ;) thank you! :) xomo

Tim Smith

Date: 11/12/2018 2:16:00 PM

I really need to get my mind out of the gutter lol...I was picturing you wearing a hoodie flashing me ...oops hehe

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/13/2018 7:53:00 AM

Heh heh, been known to do that ;)

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