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November serenade

the stream meanders
its ribbon rippling under a tired sun
that time seems to have forgotten

yet the afternoon warmth
exudes its ambrosial cachet
in the most gracious of manners

meanwhile a september breeze
gently rustles playful leaves
that have begun to turn

and autumn most willingly
parades in robes of elegance
with multicoloured jewels



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 8:55 PM
This is gorgeous, Line. Right into my FAVES. Thank you :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 3:41 AM
So glad this poem of mine resonated with you, Gershon ~
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 10:52 PM
The beauty of nature reflected in autumn's elegance is nicely captured, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 3:40 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated ~
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