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November In Climate Color Change Paradise

A brilliant day in Paradise The grass yet richest shade of green The leaves now piled on top, between Two trees ~ Fallen colors still entice

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/6/2019 1:48:00 AM

I am truly wondering if Chicago is paradise or some place else? Possibly your own yard?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/6/2019 8:35:00 AM

Where else could Paradise exist BUT in Chicago?! LOL. ~ Answer Man

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/5/2019 12:07:00 PM

Hi Gershon, You have penned lovely imagery and content. Well done my friend. Have a great day :-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2019 1:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words about the imagery in this quatrain. Warm Autumn wishes, Gershon

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/5/2019 11:37:00 AM

Splendid verse, Gershon. I always enjoy the fruit of your very versatile quill. Many thanks for your kind comments re a couple of my recent pennings. Best always - Bob H

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2019 1:46:00 PM

Bob, I appreciate your encouragement and support, AND I look forward to new poems from you! :) gw

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2019 10:45:00 AM

Such lovely imagery GW got to admit I adore the autumnal colours:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2019 1:39:00 PM

OK, I won't spread your admission around, Jan. OK? ~ Father Confessor (LOL)

Chris Green

Date: 11/5/2019 9:58:00 AM

There is always something enticing about the beauty that nature brings us. Nicely done my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2019 1:38:00 PM

Thank you for such a nice observation, Chris! Warm wishes, Gershon