November In Climate Color Change Paradise

A brilliant day in Paradise
The grass yet richest shade of green
The leaves now piled on top, between
Two trees ~ Fallen colors still entice
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 1:48 AM
I am truly wondering if Chicago is paradise or some place else? Possibly your own yard?
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Where else could Paradise exist BUT in Chicago?! LOL. ~ Answer Man
Y. Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Hi Gershon, You have penned lovely imagery and content. Well done my friend. Have a great day :-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words about the imagery in this quatrain. Warm Autumn wishes, Gershon
Hinshaw Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Splendid verse, Gershon. I always enjoy the fruit of your very versatile quill. Many thanks for your kind comments re a couple of my recent pennings. Best always - Bob H
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Bob, I appreciate your encouragement and support, AND I look forward to new poems from you! :) gw
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 10:45 AM
Such lovely imagery GW got to admit I adore the autumnal colours:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 1:39 PM
OK, I won't spread your admission around, Jan. OK? ~ Father Confessor (LOL)
Green Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 9:58 AM
There is always something enticing about the beauty that nature brings us. Nicely done my friend.
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Thank you for such a nice observation, Chris! Warm wishes, Gershon
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