November Gray

gray
are the
cloudy skies
in November
with the chilly winds
rain turns to snow
blanketing
the ground
white

Edward J Ebbs - 11/08/2023

beautifulbeautyearthearth dayninette

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Charlotte Puddifoot

November 26, 2023 at 3:38 PM

ah, this sums up chilly, bleak november so well! congrats on your win in the contest :)

Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2023 at 6:02 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

November 25, 2023 at 2:17 PM

I love the use of gray and white Edward. Congratulations! :)

Ink Empress

November 25, 2023 at 6:53 AM

I love everything about this november ninette and how descriptively you’ve painted imagery here. Theres a delicate touch to your word weaving: especially love “ rain turns to snow” and also the opening lines. Brilliant! Congratulations on your win: well deserved

Paul Callus

November 24, 2023 at 1:12 AM

Congratulations on your podium finish, Edward. Pleased that our paths have crossed again thanks to this lovely entry in Andrea's contest. ~ Regards // paul

Edward Ebbs

November 24, 2023 at 7:00 AM

Thank you Paul...