Carrie Richards Poet Sijo

November Dreams

As the year goes to sleep, all the crisp air is laden with light
The wind has a way of shaping the leaf around its restless form
lining each road and trail with heavy-lidded brilliance
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For Andrea's Contest
October Bliss/November Dreams 10/10/14

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Debbie Guzzi October 16, 2014 at 2:41 PM Ah the rich scent of Fall! Light & Love

Heather Ober October 14, 2014 at 11:20 AM Oh, I love this! Such a perfect description of this time of year and a very well-deserved win!

Barbara Gorelick October 12, 2014 at 10:16 PM Wonderful win..gorgeous.. Congrats. BG

Joseph May October 12, 2014 at 7:12 PM Beautiful Sijo....Congrats on your win

Olusegun Arowolo October 12, 2014 at 5:34 PM Classic and beautiful piece,Carrie...Congrats on your superb win.,

Regina Mcintosh October 12, 2014 at 1:15 PM And I always love the shaping... beautiful. God bless you and Congratulations. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

John Lawless October 12, 2014 at 8:41 AM Well done Carrie, I can see the season slowly closing its eyes as Mother Nature begins her winter nap

Sandra Haight October 12, 2014 at 8:23 AM Carrie, congratulations on your fine win! I especially liked "The wind has a way of shaping the leaf around its restless form." Great imagery in your* words. Sandra

Paul Callus October 12, 2014 at 5:59 AM Beautiful rendition of an excellent sigo, Carrie! Love the wind's restless form and the heavy-lidded brilliance. Congrats on a deserved podium finish! // paul

Maurice Yvonne October 12, 2014 at 5:45 AM Another brilliant write, Congratulations on your fine win.

Jan Allison October 12, 2014 at 5:25 AM dropping back with my congrats Carrie so good to read this again:-) hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani October 12, 2014 at 4:19 AM wonderful- I like the reslessness of the wind and how it lines the leaves at the edge of the roads. congrats, Carrie.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:46 AM Lovely dreams of November, Carrie, congrats on the win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2014 at 1:04 AM Brilliant write Carrie! Congrats on huge win!

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2014 at 12:20 AM I could tell this one was written by a very intelligent writer. Loved it, Carrie!! Congrats on your second place.

Jan Allison October 11, 2014 at 2:53 AM The is brilliant Carrie I am sure Andrea will love it! Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx