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November Dreams

As the year goes to sleep, all the crisp air is laden with light
The wind has a way of shaping the leaf around its restless form
lining each road and trail with heavy-lidded brilliance
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For Andrea's Contest
October Bliss/November Dreams 10/10/14

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2014

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/16/2014 2:41:00 PM Ah the rich scent of Fall! Light & Love Login to Reply

Heather Ober Date: 10/14/2014 11:20:00 AM Oh, I love this! Such a perfect description of this time of year and a very well-deserved win! Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/12/2014 10:16:00 PM Wonderful win..gorgeous.. Congrats. BG Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/12/2014 7:12:00 PM Beautiful Sijo....Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 10/12/2014 5:34:00 PM Classic and beautiful piece,Carrie...Congrats on your superb win., Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/12/2014 1:15:00 PM And I always love the shaping... beautiful. God bless you and Congratulations. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 10/12/2014 8:41:00 AM Well done Carrie, I can see the season slowly closing its eyes as Mother Nature begins her winter nap Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 10/12/2014 8:23:00 AM Carrie, congratulations on your fine win! I especially liked "The wind has a way of shaping the leaf around its restless form." Great imagery in your* words. Sandra Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/12/2014 5:59:00 AM Beautiful rendition of an excellent sigo, Carrie! Love the wind's restless form and the heavy-lidded brilliance. Congrats on a deserved podium finish! // paul Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/12/2014 5:45:00 AM Another brilliant write, Congratulations on your fine win. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2014 5:25:00 AM dropping back with my congrats Carrie so good to read this again:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 10/12/2014 4:19:00 AM wonderful- I like the reslessness of the wind and how it lines the leaves at the edge of the roads. congrats, Carrie. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/12/2014 1:46:00 AM Lovely dreams of November, Carrie, congrats on the win Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/12/2014 1:04:00 AM Brilliant write Carrie! Congrats on huge win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2014 12:20:00 AM I could tell this one was written by a very intelligent writer. Loved it, Carrie!! Congrats on your second place. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2014 2:53:00 AM The is brilliant Carrie I am sure Andrea will love it! Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply