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November Dreams

As the year goes to sleep, all the crisp air is laden with light The wind has a way of shaping the leaf around its restless form lining each road and trail with heavy-lidded brilliance ____________ For Andrea's Contest October Bliss/November Dreams 10/10/14

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/16/2014 2:41:00 PM

Ah the rich scent of Fall! Light & Love

Heather Ober

Date: 10/14/2014 11:20:00 AM

Oh, I love this! Such a perfect description of this time of year and a very well-deserved win!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/12/2014 10:16:00 PM

Wonderful win..gorgeous.. Congrats. BG

Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2014 7:12:00 PM

Beautiful Sijo....Congrats on your win

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/12/2014 5:34:00 PM

Classic and beautiful piece,Carrie...Congrats on your superb win.,

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/12/2014 1:15:00 PM

And I always love the shaping... beautiful. God bless you and Congratulations. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

John Lawless

Date: 10/12/2014 8:41:00 AM

Well done Carrie, I can see the season slowly closing its eyes as Mother Nature begins her winter nap

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/12/2014 8:23:00 AM

Carrie, congratulations on your fine win! I especially liked "The wind has a way of shaping the leaf around its restless form." Great imagery in your* words. Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 5:59:00 AM

Beautiful rendition of an excellent sigo, Carrie! Love the wind's restless form and the heavy-lidded brilliance. Congrats on a deserved podium finish! // paul