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November Dark Skies

cold and indifferent 
relentless autumn rain
garnet ruby topaz
brawny clingy leaves
dangling from lean branches
holding on for dear life
waving so gently one moment
then wild in a raging ballet
stiff-necked and trembling
amidst gale winds
determined to never give up
its feat of beauty over strength
mystifying cycle of nature



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Submitted on November 9, 2017 for CONTEST NO.360 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/9/2017 9:07:00 PM
Beautiful, lively, appealing poem--superb use of figurative language, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2017 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. I appreciate your comments. Have an awesome weekend!

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