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November Dark Skies

cold and indifferent relentless autumn rain garnet ruby topaz brawny clingy leaves dangling from lean branches holding on for dear life waving so gently one moment then wild in a raging ballet stiff-necked and trembling amidst gale winds determined to never give up its feat of beauty over strength mystifying cycle of nature AP: 1st place 2020, 2nd place 2020 Submitted on November 9, 2017 for CONTEST NO.360 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 11/9/2017 9:07:00 PM
Beautiful, lively, appealing poem--superb use of figurative language, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2017 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. I appreciate your comments. Have an awesome weekend!

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