November Curtain Call

THUD... down it crashes... evil darkness... shoves aside rays gentle, warm light

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/14/2019 12:16:00 AM

Winter has arrived here as well, and it is exactly like you have penned it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/14/2019 10:55:00 AM

THUD!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/13/2019 12:49:00 PM

You have explained November perfectly Gershon! Thud(drats) here comes winter! Oooh I hate the winter! So cold and dreary! But love how you explained it!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/15/2019 2:07:00 AM

Hey if you can so can I my friend!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2019 3:36:00 PM

Brenda, I have always disliked winter intensely too. This year am embracing it. I am gonna change my B.A. for 'Bad Attitude' into a BA for 'Best Attitude!' How about you?! ~ Pollyanna Wolf

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2019 10:35:00 AM

Nicely done my friend. I was going to say nice contrast but Kim and Sandy beat me to it below. : )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2019 12:02:00 PM

Women are always beating us, aren't they?! LOL. ~ Battered husband

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2019 9:33:00 AM

What a contrast!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2019 12:01:00 PM

Yup. The bully had his ways this time. :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/12/2019 7:53:00 PM

nice contrast....made me think of this crazy weather...wish the rays would come back here and warm things up... hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2019 12:00:00 PM

If the sun's rays won't come back, perhaps the Tampa Bay RAYS (pro baseball team) can head your way and warm things up?! Whatever it takes to get rid of the cold, I say! Cheers, Gershon