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November

November

the lost souls 
have returned 
mumbling then roaring 
day and night
around the windows and doors.
perhaps they are jealous 
of the warmth that melts them
into puddles of discontent
across the threshold.

clouds streak the skies
like ancient winding sheets
grey and feathered about their edges
threatening to smother any cheer
that crosses through the pre-winter chill.
yet far into the dusk, red appears
like a distant beacon, a ray of hope.
the fray-fingered trees lose 
their frightening qualities

as they turn toward the horizon.
the wolves howl becomes a carol
owls murmurs soften, into streams
of angel wings passing in the almost night.
snow begins, at first tentative single flakes
then bundles and wafts cover the raw land
soften, sanctify swell upon the nakedness.
all that is harm backs away, 
slinks into crevices
before the lady's coming, 
before the Christmas spirit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/29/2017 5:40:00 PM
Hello Patricia I enjoyed your poetry. My favourite verses are the last verse and the 1st. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:57:00 AM
you really know how to create vivid imagery in your creative poem... well written..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:44:00 AM
That is because I want you there beside me sharing/living the experience. Silent One you are the best!
Date: 11/17/2017 6:34:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this poem--so well written!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 11/17/2017 3:59:00 AM
Ah, yes, the imagery of snow falling, so beautiful my friend! I just love it when it's snowing outside, as long as it doesn't impede my driving I'm fine with it! I love it when it's colder outside, and that usually brings with it snow! There usually is a calm that comes from a tender snowfall...even the owls know its grandiose! I really loved your wondrous poem here this morning Patricia! You have delighted me by your harmonious piece of tranquility, Great Work!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:50:00 AM
Russell you are as I have long expected an old softie when it comes to Christmas and natures preparations for the season. Thank you for seeing it with wonder.
Date: 11/16/2017 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Patricia.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/16/2017 6:24:00 PM
Lovely writing, as usual, and sooo descriptive. I've never lived where snow came early, but wind - oh, the wind!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/20/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Sunny One stay warm.

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