November

November

the lost souls 
have returned 
mumbling then roaring 
day and night
around the windows and doors.
perhaps they are jealous 
of the warmth that melts them
into puddles of discontent
across the threshold.

clouds streak the skies
like ancient winding sheets
grey and feathered about their edges
threatening to smother any cheer
that crosses through the pre-winter chill.
yet far into the dusk, red appears
like a distant beacon, a ray of hope.
the fray-fingered trees lose 
their frightening qualities

as they turn toward the horizon.
the wolves howl becomes a carol
owls murmurs soften, into streams
of angel wings passing in the almost night.
snow begins, at first tentative single flakes
then bundles and wafts cover the raw land
soften, sanctify swell upon the nakedness.
all that is harm backs away, 
slinks into crevices
before the lady's coming, 
before the Christmas spirit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Hello Patricia I enjoyed your poetry. My favourite verses are the last verse and the 1st. have a nice evening my friend.
One Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 7:57 AM
you really know how to create vivid imagery in your creative poem... well written..
Cresswell Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:44 AM
That is because I want you there beside me sharing/living the experience. Silent One you are the best!
Pandit Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Beautiful imagery in this poem--so well written!
Cresswell Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:46 AM
Thank you Vijay.
Sivey Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 3:59 AM
Ah, yes, the imagery of snow falling, so beautiful my friend! I just love it when it's snowing outside, as long as it doesn't impede my driving I'm fine with it! I love it when it's colder outside, and that usually brings with it snow! There usually is a calm that comes from a tender snowfall...even the owls know its grandiose! I really loved your wondrous poem here this morning Patricia! You have delighted me by your harmonious piece of tranquility, Great Work!!
Cresswell Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Russell you are as I have long expected an old softie when it comes to Christmas and natures preparations for the season. Thank you for seeing it with wonder.
Gauthier Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Beautiful imagery, Patricia.
Cresswell Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Line.
Wanter Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Lovely writing, as usual, and sooo descriptive. I've never lived where snow came early, but wind - oh, the wind!
Cresswell Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Sunny One stay warm.
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