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Noumenon

I am but an ancient tree Upstanding in my singularity Ordained by the forest of my forefathers I am full spread reaching for the sun The light of 4.6 billion years never done The source of all things living Blanketed in the first snow of countless seasons Branches laden with the weight of age and gravity Ancestral roots of infinite years Entwined with the pathway of my elders I reach deep into the richness of my mother earth Binding me to the womb of all that's known A fertile union of exquisite definition Conceiving the severity of truth To harvest the heart of compassion A simple white dream A prophet's decree I am captive to move and sway With the purity of this moment Drifting within the winds of wisdom And timeless certainty And in this time and space I become one with that destiny To be or not in the realm of its tranquility To breathe with the rhythm and harmony The beautiful cadence I dance to The tick-tock clock of eternity

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Date: 5/29/2022 12:36:00 PM
I visited the breathtaking Yosemite and marveled at its beauty many years ago. You honor the splendor of this special tree with your artful words Lonna. A lovely poem deserving of your First placement. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/12/2022 12:17:00 PM
Thank you for your great comment Connie. Blessings to you too!
Date: 1/24/2021 1:46:00 PM
We are bound by that tick-tock of eternity for sure but some day we won't worry about time or space or so I think. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 1/24/2021 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 2/8/2020 6:16:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The tempo was great and the imagery fantastic!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/15/2020 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Valerie. It is one of my very favorite places anywhere! I wrote it in Yosemite. Lonna
Date: 2/8/2020 12:12:00 AM
Lonna, I love the last line -the tick tock of eternity. Well done, thoughtful
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 2/15/2020 5:32:00 PM
So happy you liked it. Lonna
Date: 6/6/2019 12:44:00 PM
Hello Lonna Blodgettt, I like this poem about the ancient tree. it has live a long life. Have a nice day my friend.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 6/6/2019 7:51:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 5/25/2019 6:17:00 PM
Lovely, Lonna. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/25/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you Line for your kind word. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/24/2019 7:48:00 PM
This poem is amazing Lonna! Stunning in it's beauty and comfort it gives with its timeless gifts of fresh air, sustaining us along with other trees, providing oxygen we can not live without. I revere the worth of trees and your tribute to them is so impressive. This gem is going into my faves! Congratulations on your podium win. It is most deserving! : )
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/24/2019 10:06:00 PM
I am humbled by your appreciation!
Date: 5/24/2019 6:58:00 PM
The beauty of the day and Yosemite were great inspirations for you. Love this. Congrats for your win.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/24/2019 10:05:00 PM
Appreciate your comments very much.
Date: 5/24/2019 6:37:00 AM
You created an endearing artfully crafted piece of gem as it enhanced and instilled the indelible intricacies of the bountiful life that abounds our being as seen through another light. I thank you for your sharing and with my compliments for 3rd Place in the Epic Ethereal Editor Contest, Aloha, William Kekaula
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/24/2019 10:35:00 AM
Thank you kindly for your generous comments. I feel very honored to have participated. Looking forward to the next. Lonna

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