Local Order Poet Free verse

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Five hours straight
Through the night.
Fingers pitch black
In old moonlight.

Skim milky mountain waves,
Peak tree greetings.
Signal flare kite,
Dive right!

River willow window,
Coat rack recruit.
Red bedding pillow,
Plastic tomb salute.

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2018 at 8:24 PM A poem with advice to a person is a great idea in a poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2018 at 8:22 PM A poem with advice to a person is a great idea in a poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu January 16, 2018 at 8:12 PM I find this to be asad poem. Local Order November 14, 2018 at 1:13 AM yes.