Noticed Your Tribulations -Part 2-

Hm, well, I see you need to give yourself a lot more credit
Than you give yourself daily – you’re modest, I do admit 

You have a witty and clever side in you deep down
What about you outsmart the emptiness inside?
It appears that you like staying home instead of making friends in town
You need to reach out to friends and not hide…

I know it’s more than difficult to express yourself more articulate
My insight towards your struggles are interpreted most accurate 

I cried a little for the sake of you, 
Hoping you will listen to me too
I am telling you this out of pure love, my dear love
You’re loved...that's hard to make an argument of

Love, shine on and press on forward as you please
Revealing the true you will delight yourself at ease
No longer remain a dim light in the darkness after midnight, my darling delight
Go further into the depths of determination towards the search of His light

Oh, you dim light,
Do shine on tonight
Oh, my dim light,
Please accept my delight
That I hand to you with open arms, hon
You’re a daydream away, no harm done 
Oh, you dim light,
Have wings of flight
Oh, my dim light,
Push away the plight 
From your life
And from my life

Vanish, strife!

I noticed you got too timid to stand up for what’s right
Yes, I know I notice things too much, but you’ll be alright
I know you want a shoulder to lean on and vent your heart out
I’ll be here to simply listen and see your glisten of your no-doubt

Oh, your dim light needs to come out of the dark
Reveal your hidden might and build an arduous ark
Almost like Noah and his trust-worthy, robust crew
Oh, my dim light, glimmer graciously and prove your worth too

Don’t let fear and doubt become erect
Actually, we were made far from perfect
You can still try to reach to the bar of flawless feelings so brazen 
It will be surreal for real, so don’t dry up like a rancid, little raisin 

Bring me your bravery and brew away the nightmarish dreams 
Heal me higher than the high-hopes hills with open, haven hands
I’ll be a tree, planted by the colorful rocks and shining streams 
Free-falling without a dire fright in the fire of your desired demands

I wanted you back
My phases of manias got out of whack
I had got your back
Until I lost track of what you meant to me
But, you can’t come back
My innocence went from white to black
Just leave and please be back
Just waiting for you to forgive me sincerely

Don’t turn your back on me
Turn away from the wretched yesterday 
I’m sorry I didn’t let you be
Unravel all of you like yarn night and day

You devour me like a shark
You torn me up from the start
Yes, you left your teeth mark 
On my aching, breaking heart

You departed from the purity of light
You abandoned it because of scars you had and you were mad
The past haunts us like stars at night
Misery makes harmony with hatred and makes us feel so sad

Don’t leave
My sight, not just yet
I won’t grieve 
In tough rage and regret
I want to believe
By all the hopes and cheers I can get
I need to be caught in the net
Of faithful ensnarement that doesn’t get me upset

Don’t let fear and doubt become erect
Actually, we were made far from perfect
You can still try to reach to the bar of flawless feelings so brazen 
It will be surreal for real, so don’t dry up like a rancid, little raisin  

Back track the troubled, terrible times when I had your back  
Self-control and self-confidence is what you lack, even way back
In those days that deeply distracted you and made you remorseful
Well, those days are over, so don’t muse daily on them, beautiful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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July 11, 2018 at 6:09 AM
JW.. this is a compelling conclusion!
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July 11, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Thank you for reading both the series of poetry. I have a new series of poetry out about the struggles of restlessness and insomnia. :) -JWE aka I couldn't sleep since I was young...the struggle is horrible... But hoping it gets better with time and healing. xD
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