Get Your Premium Membership

Noticed

NOTICED phatic response “good and you?” pair of smiles 7/17/2017 Senryu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/17/2017 9:45:00 AM
Or the standard...I'm fine. :) Well done Kim.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2017 10:19:00 AM
Good and you helped the reader to understand this was an exchange between two people, perhaps even strangers :) Thanks, Chris!

Book: Shattered Sighs