Notice You

Our dark side No guarantees Handle with care What you see is real I fall into invisibility so often Irked by everyone - no one noticed I'm invisible Wasted by my own mind games Self-fulfilling monologue Repeat Repeat degrade Repeat downgrade Life without meaning Meaning Ah fall in to that old illusion Build your sand castle of self-importance Man the ramparts to repel perceived attacks Audio distortion, plague me Vision distortion, plague me Physical distortion, plague me Nothing is the only real That’s it! Nothing, Oh My No thing is all OM Breath Breath in the air Let it out, watch it go OM

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/17/2024 8:20:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.