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Notice. Notice how l loved the world but eyes of others didn't see Notice how l sang the words but lips refused to speak it. Notice how l heard the song but no one ever listened Notice how its all around but people pushed away. Notice time was always here but now its made with fear Notice somethings cant be seen but came and went and always been. Notice force invisible but captured me and you and us and Notice how it held us tight to free the light from prison's night. Notice how has gentle arms but safely holds us tight and Notice warmth now all above to absorb its life and all its Love.

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Date: 12/10/2024 6:38:00 AM
Quite some notice. Everybody should read this and reflect on it.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/11/2024 5:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comment. Another one of my poems l had forgotten about. Sometimes l think l think too deeply, but l guess all poets do that and writing them down helps get through this journey we call life. When l have sad days l cant write, but happy days l reflect & it brings me peace, even if its a sad poem. l wonder if others feel the same when they write poetry? take care. Jx
Date: 3/9/2020 3:22:00 AM
Nice one...Have you NOTICED...
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/9/2020 5:50:00 AM
l fly through my life at break neck speed & reading poetry stops me for a short while to drink in the beauty that is all around. l need reminders to do that. thank you for visiting my page. take care and best wishes always. J x
Date: 3/7/2020 10:27:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Jackie.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/8/2020 5:50:00 AM
thank you..lm not sure where the inspiration for this poem came from. l just picked up my pen and paper and it just came without any direction..very strange. Jx

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