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Nothing Remains

You died. And nothing happened. No whisper. No light. No shift in the air. Only the room— exactly as it was, minus you. I stood there, expecting something. A crack in the fabric. A sign. A sound. Anything. But all I found was stillness carrying on without effort, without care. They spoke your name as if it held weight. But even that faded before the echo could finish. No afterlife. No message. No you. Just a body emptied and a silence that doesn’t remember what it’s missing. Grief isn’t proof of love. It’s the body glitching, trying to react to an absence too complete to comprehend. You are gone. And the world never noticed. And soon, so will I. So will all of us. Forgotten, unmarked, folded back into nothing. Exactly where we came from.

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Date: 6/19/2025 12:55:00 AM
Hello Aarron, this is a very powerful write, loved the ending, (many choose to forget that.) Wishing you a wonderful day, fellow poet.
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Date: 6/18/2025 4:02:00 AM
Such grace. This silent grief space. I feel, here, sparse thoughts. Spiritual longing to belong and our natural belonging to longing loss. This animal awareness that the cost of love and life is loss and death, and possibly the gift of recognizing this as free grace and binding grief. Brilliant and edgy resonance.
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Date: 6/17/2025 3:29:00 PM
reading your poem touched my soul in a very deep place....the last verse is especially poignant. yellow rose
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Date: 6/17/2025 2:10:00 PM
Incredibly accurate, beautifully worded and so awfully sad. This will strike a chord for anyone who has loved and lost.
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Date: 4/1/2025 1:19:00 PM
This is charming and haunting. I love how grief is compared to a glitch, very creative. I love this poem so much
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