Nothing On

Folks in Old Coppice have been heard to say,
Sometimes a swirling evening mist comes down,
And glimpsed as in a waking dream they may
See wraith-like figures wandering on the lawn
In silent converse, they're so pale and wan,
And to a man, they've all got nothing on.

A hearty game of volleyball they'd play,
If weather wet, then maybe dominoes.
Earnest discourse on issues of the day,
Over tea and buttered crumpets, who knows,
Who can recall, such days of old, long gone?
In innocence, they all had nothing on.

Their pleasure was the sunshine on their skin.
Unfettered by the clothes of everyday,
Their harmless actions seen by some as sin,
A wicked presence on the Shropshire Way.
The trappings of the world outside forgone,
Their happiness, they all had nothing on.

These days, enlightened, we no longer judge
Their simple pastime as abomination.
Sun lovers all around the world indulge
And imitate the dawn of all creation,
Reflecting on a paradise that's gone,
One man, one woman, each with nothing on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/23/2017 10:00:00 AM
This is sad and witty and curious all at the same time. I enjoyed every word.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/23/2017 6:40:00 PM
Oh god everything is turning into housing estates with absolutely no aesthetic appeal "Little boxes made of sticky tacky"; and no history.
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/23/2017 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Patricia. It's all about a nudist club that existed in the 1920's just up the road from where I live. The site is now a housing estate. Glad you enjoyed it.
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