Nothing Mundane

For each singular occurrence fleeting before me,
All senses come alive to experience life’s motion
Filled with a thirst of discoveries—a hunchbacked
Rock gleaming, salty nectar pouring on the tongue,
An insatiable need to quill under moonshine..

Then to allow the unexpected to happen
Without examining its reason,
As though a vigor of the unknown creates
Some divine exploration,   my belly on fire,   down
To earth or above heaven’s ridges..and I would slither
Away from what is mundane…the hardness,
The softness of nature’s terrain assaulting
My being, that I find seemingly inconsequential
Moments consequential: Somehow, this willingness
To ride with uncertainty leaves me awestruck—
Encountering the uniqueness of new ventures , inimitable.

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11/6/2018
John Lawless’ Creative Conformity Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/14/2018 1:11:00 PM
Remarkable imagery; precious poesy. Stunning altogether! Congrats on your richly deserved win in the contest, nette! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 11/13/2018 3:28:00 PM
Many congrats nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2018 6:27:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, nette. Well penned.
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Date: 11/11/2018 7:44:00 PM
Nette, the nuances of the subtleties of simplicity tip-toe through this poem. thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 11/10/2018 7:32:00 AM
Nette.. I found myself melting into these words as if I was sharing in them.. this zest to experience all that life is and the adventure set before us.. your words are both beautiful and philosophical!
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Date: 11/6/2018 1:13:00 PM
This is so impressive, Nette!! Just excellent and a perfect entry for the contest xxoo
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Date: 11/6/2018 12:22:00 PM
Brilliant verse Nette, you write very rich deep awesome poetry . Good luck. Tom. Am I right in saying you've been to Casablanca recently. ?
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Date: 11/6/2018 9:27:00 AM
Wow, this is great! To learn to ride with uncertainty. Well written Nette :)
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Date: 11/6/2018 9:26:00 AM
This was a wonderfully woven story in a beautiful poetic fashion. Your words always enchant me Nette, regardless of theme or form. There is always a smooth texture to your poetry that allows the read to immerse themselves in search of the deeper meaning.
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