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The diction is fiction......The destination.....destruction.....

Chorus: If lonely is a prison... Lord knows I've done my time From my lying destination, To the truth I've left behind There's another losing diamond, In every card I'm dealt I'll be holding on to nothing Until there's nothing left Verse: Every word my mama said Keeps exploding in my head Son, it's not too late to turn around Remembering...when my daddy left With all those promises...unkept Me and my old man..... share common ground Bridge: Silence is the hammer... Memories are the nails... Every path to freedom Becomes an empty trail Heartache is the music Every day... the fear Too early for confession Too late to form a tear Chorus: If lonely is a prison... Lord knows I've done my time From my lying destination To the truth I've left behind...... Protected by copyright

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/19/2017 7:05:00 AM

I am in awe of this magnificent creation my friend.. You have a rare gift to be able to write like this, IMHO. a FAV...

Chuck Melugin
Date: 9/21/2017 1:33:00 PM

For this golden comment, I humbly thank you Robert. God bless, chuck

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/26/2017 7:54:00 AM

You appear to possess a skill that I don't, for I've never been able to write songs. Well penned.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 8/26/2017 8:38:00 AM

Thanks, Scott You possess poetic purpose and present it in excellence. Later...chuck

John Hamilton

Date: 8/3/2017 11:24:00 AM

Hi Chuck, I enjoyed this very much, if lonely is a prison...Lord knows I've done my time. This is so well written and melodic I can hear this as a great country song, that's a good sign.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 8/25/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thanks John I so appreciate your comment. Write on! chuck

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/1/2017 4:04:00 PM

Absolutely gorgeous :)

Chuck Melugin
Date: 8/22/2017 10:00:00 AM

Thanks Akkina. Your words lifted my spirit. My best, chuck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2017 6:43:00 PM

Chuck if this were made into a song, it would flow so smoothly with its perfect beat. It's a sad song and would do well as a country tune! You got a type in your last chorus (I for IF)

Chuck Melugin
Date: 8/22/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. You are appreciated! My best, chuck

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/10/2017 12:40:00 PM

Chuck, I have enjoyed your poem. I sense that it is a form of a song.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/16/2017 3:02:00 AM

Thanks, Darlene

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/8/2017 9:12:00 PM

Profound and oh so true; that is the way in which it works...great job.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/16/2017 3:01:00 AM

Thank you, M.L.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 7/7/2017 7:10:00 PM

And a big thank you Peter, Friend, Poet and an awesome addition to our planet! My best, chuck

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/5/2017 10:32:00 AM

Very cool lyrical poem, Chuck. It has emotional jolt and the juice. Excellent poetry. Love always and forever.

Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/5/2017 12:19:00 PM

Freddie, All my thanks! You were born to write and you dance in your purpose with excellence and humility, a combination worn by few. My best to you, chuck

Maria Williams

Date: 7/5/2017 8:16:00 AM

I like this lyric Chuck, it's very well written - there are no ratings unfortunately but it definitely rates a 7+...Maria

Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/5/2017 12:10:00 PM

Thanks Maria and best wishes for your wishes as they dance to your poetic music!, chuck