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Nothing Lasts Forever

Someone mentioned in a letter Your best is getting better Their unfettered glee and hope Was seen through the envelope "I guess you know now There is always a 'somehow' We're endowed with great ability, The greatest shown in humility" Nothing lasts, but exceptions exist I only ask "Forever persist." 1-15-2018 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme II - Poetry Contest Laura Loo

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Date: 1/21/2018 9:00:00 PM
Good spin on your winning poem. Well done, Trey.
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Trey Hamner
Date: 2/8/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Line. :)
Date: 1/20/2018 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Trey, nicely done ! Hugs Eve~`*
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/20/2018 9:20:00 PM
Thank you Eve. :)
Date: 1/20/2018 4:51:00 PM
beautifully rhymed Trey congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/20/2018 9:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan.
Date: 1/20/2018 10:58:00 AM
beautifully expressed dear Trey, I love your name too :) congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/20/2018 9:22:00 PM
Thank you Laura, I very much enjoyed the contest...I look forward to your next one. :)