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Nothing in life is forever, nature's seasons teach us that; people leave, people die to be seen never no gold remains where once love sat. Everything in the world is ever changing, but, oddly my grief stays; nature and memories always re-arranging, and gold moments fade to weeping days. ______________________ February 23, 2023 Written for the contest, Inspired by Robert Frost's Nothing Gold Can Stay sponsor, JCB Brul

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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/28/2023 1:53:00 PM

Wishing Good results in the contest Constance. Enjoyed thinking on the points you Highlight so well Constance '

Constance La France
Date: 3/1/2023 7:16:00 AM

Joe, thank you so much for the comment and encouragement, blessings, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2023 4:30:00 PM

I love how you did this , Short and POIGNANT.

Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2023 9:33:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/24/2023 12:02:00 AM

Very beautifully expressed Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2023 12:32:00 PM

Arthur, thank you so much for the visit and the compliment, blessings, Constance

Christina Bowring

Date: 2/23/2023 3:27:00 PM

A beautiful poem Constance and a reminder of just how life and love can be so fleeting and yet loss and grief can be eternal

Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2023 12:33:00 PM

Christina, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings, Constance

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/23/2023 12:27:00 PM

there are some pains inlaid in the soul dear poet...good luck in the contest

Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2023 12:33:00 PM

Frederic, thank you so much for the visit, comment and encouragement, blessings, Constance

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/23/2023 11:30:00 AM

As for you, see that what you have heard from the beginning remains in you. If it does, you also will remain in the Son and in the Father. And this is what he promised us—eternal life. As for you, the anointing you received from him remains in you, and you do not need anyone to teach you. But as his anointing teaches you about all things and as that anointing is real, not counterfeit—just as it has taught you, remain in him. 1 John 2:24?-?25?, ?27 NIV. : ). Blessings my dear friend, love it

Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2023 11:32:00 AM

Stephan, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the compliment, blessings, Constance