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Nothing Is Forever

Nothing in life is forever, nature's seasons teach us that; people leave, people die to be seen never no gold remains where once love sat. Everything in the world is ever changing, but, oddly my grief stays; nature and memories always re-arranging, and gold moments fade to weeping days. ______________________ February 23, 2023 Written for the contest, Inspired by Robert Frost's Nothing Gold Can Stay sponsor, JCB Brul
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Maverick Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Wishing Good results in the contest Constance. Enjoyed thinking on the points you Highlight so well Constance '
La France Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the comment and encouragement, blessings, Constance
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 4:30 PM
I love how you did this , Short and POIGNANT.
La France Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 9:33 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Bowring Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:27 PM
A beautiful poem Constance and a reminder of just how life and love can be so fleeting and yet loss and grief can be eternal
La France Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Christina, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings, Constance
Parker Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 12:27 PM
there are some pains inlaid in the soul dear poet...good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Frederic, thank you so much for the visit, comment and encouragement, blessings, Constance
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February 23, 2023 at 11:30 AM
As for you, see that what you have heard from the beginning remains in you. If it does, you also will remain in the Son and in the Father. And this is what he promised us—eternal life. As for you, the anointing you received from him remains in you, and you do not need anyone to teach you. But as his anointing teaches you about all things and as that anointing is real, not counterfeit—just as it has taught you, remain in him. 1 John 2:24?-?25?, ?27 NIV. : ). Blessings my dear friend, love it
La France Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the compliment, blessings, Constance
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