Nothing Fancy - Collaboration With Chris Green

I wound her around my pinky
   She wrapped her heart
      in cellophane 
and gave it me for my birthday 
   I gave her myself
      in rough paper

Nothing fancy, just the pieces
   she seemed to like
      no bows, no card
and she accepted it excitedly
   as if she somehow knew
      it wasn’t me

I painted her a cup and saucer
   she filled it to the brim
      with smiles
she added ample milk and sugar 
   to my canvas, white
      pure delight

As we sipped on memories,
   not those of the past,
      but coming
where a blank canvas waited
   anticipating brush strokes,
      colorfully expressed

***


September 10, 2017
Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Very cozy and intimate, perhaps old lovers reuniting.
White Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:44 AM
Who knows :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 6:06 PM
What a beautiful collaboration! I love the metaphors and the fact that your styles of poetry mesh so beautifully together. Lovely! : )
White Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:44 AM
Thanks so much Connie :)
Williams Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 4:34 AM
Love your collaboration as always Darren and Chris. Looking forward to the blank canvas being painted too....Maria
White Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:43 AM
So do I, Maria :)
Ella Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:33 PM
:D Lovely and fun! A wonderful poem - I look forward to your collaborations <3
White Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:42 AM
Yeah, love collaborating with Chris :)
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 1:07 PM
- Maybe not fancy ... but lovely, Darren & Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 1:41 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Magical mischief makers you two. This is delightful.
White Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 12:18 PM
Thank you, Jean :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Delightful pen my friends, tickles me deeply xomo x2
White Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Thank you ma mo :)
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