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Nothing But Darkness

so think about the things that we will have to struggle through darkness nothing but darkness no sun to gaze no painted hue so many people are sure to falter at this most treacherous of plights those who are the stronger will see the dawn of a new light for those not strong enough there is mercy And there is life someone will pick them up and carry them away from the strife

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Date: 2/12/2025 11:22:00 AM
Nice simple descriptiveness in this write. However, one small correction is needed: At the end of your fifth line, you are incorrectly using the word "hew". That is a verb meaning to strike something in order to cut it. What you want is "hue"; that's a noun defined as a colorful object. Everything else looks good.
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Date: 2/12/2025 3:18:00 AM
Nice penning Amy, good imagery and expression with insightful line of thought for indeed we need hope to get through the darkness. Take care, Gordon
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