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Nothing But Apathy

I have no stars left to count, no scarlet lilies left to pick and in my aching sympathies I find apathetic desires. Mother nature brought her introvenient shame withering all willows weeping. Abandoned leaves dive… - - - -delicate crimson. Date written: May 3, 2019

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Date: 5/24/2019 2:37:00 PM
Good choice , Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/5/2019 2:17:00 AM
Oh Luloo, I think Greg will really like this one. A lovely emotive piece! : )xxoo
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Date: 5/7/2019 10:44:00 AM
many thanks lovely Connie! :)-luloo
Date: 5/2/2019 6:36:00 PM
Such a beautiful way to describe that waning stage of life....Not your own!!! A fictional one.
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Date: 5/7/2019 10:44:00 AM
nope not mine! thank you sweet Sunlite! You are the best...:) -luloo

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