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Notes of Relief

Daylight I was so close to you As to yours We share my darkness Must we breathe in just A bottle of champagne A can of olives Two unpeeled tangerines On this evenings campaign Midnight lies within a crush Metaphors of silence My dear I just cannot hush Beneath our skies murder lies Sensationally I quiver at your touch Occasionally you whisper It’s just too much A product of pure lush Two adults Within an undefined trust Lust A gentle thrust Sleepless My nights beside you A ship of marvels A day of dreaming My mistress of deceit I adore you Do fulfill my notes of relief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/18/2009 2:25:00 PM
This is a provocative piece full of passion and vivid imagery. Very seductive writing drawing the reader into the world of the write. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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