Notes of Relief

Daylight
I was so close to you
As to yours 
We share my darkness
Must we breathe in just
A bottle of champagne 
A can of olives 
Two unpeeled tangerines 
On this evenings campaign 
Midnight lies within a crush
Metaphors of silence
My dear
I just cannot hush
Beneath our skies murder lies
Sensationally 
I quiver at your touch
Occasionally you whisper
It’s just too much
A product of pure lush
Two adults 
Within an undefined trust
Lust
A gentle thrust
Sleepless 
My nights beside you
A ship of marvels
A day of dreaming
My mistress of deceit
I adore you
Do fulfill my notes of relief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 18, 2009 at 2:25 PM
This is a provocative piece full of passion and vivid imagery. Very seductive writing drawing the reader into the world of the write. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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