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Notes From a Guitar --Sq

I recall June dreams beyond seasons' past
which bring me down lanes where old guitars  waft ;
his fingers twanging notes, our laughter screams   
   beyond seasons' past... I recall June dreams.

This man I adore as  God’s prized token,
grunts at fairy books with scowls unspoken
yet hands would strum about mythical lore ...
    as God’s prized token, this man I adore.

Lurks the night raven with venom impressed--
casting a fierce shock upon his dear chest
to  drown rhapsodies from our lane's haven:
    with venom impressed, lurks the night raven.

Ablaze in this heart, fiddler’s tunes I keep
where moments enchanted prance in my sleep--
Grandpa, not in time will we be apart,
    fiddler's tunes I keep... ablaze in this heart.



Swap The Verse Contest of Joseph May
` included SQ in the title after posting`
6/13/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Oh this gives really smooth soft velvet touch of a delicate love. This is gorgeous. Best wishes for the contest :)
Makama Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 3:45 PM
I enjoy this poem as "SUMMER LOVE". So romantic with a soft touch to the soul. Good writer Nette Onclaud. It's been a while.
Rose  Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 12:14 PM
One never forgets the magical moments shared with a loved one and music combined. Well written Nette, Hope all is well, keep the faith, and God will provide, xo
Lalion Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 6:21 PM
Totally bittersweet poem told masterfully through your unique words. Thank you for listing my work as a winner!
Mcintosh Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:55 AM
This is simply amazing. I so love it. God bless you sweet friend with many more amazing writes. Love, Gina
Michael Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 11:29 AM
A lovely write here...inspired by the strum of a guitar... he be always in your heart
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