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Not Very Polished

A crude young fellow from upstate New York He never learned to handle a fork He jabbed at his food In fact, he was quite rude And he behaved like a back country dork.
Written May 29, 2022 10/10/6/6/10

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Date: 6/2/2022 4:08:00 AM
I kind of like the back county dorks; prefer them to the pompous arrogant non back country dorks.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 9:48:00 AM
Oh my, yes. I totally agree. I was a back country dork when I was a kid. Soooo naive, you wouldn't believe it. I was smart in some ways, so dumb in others.
Date: 5/29/2022 12:02:00 PM
L Milton you are doing limericks proud. Another laugh out loud from me jajaja. Thus the invention of the "spork". Thanks again...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 5/29/2022 8:57:00 PM
So true IS true creation. I imagine it's like giving birth without complications. Easy breathing & NO pushing. It just plops out...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/29/2022 12:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jeff. When I try to write a good one, it just won't come. When I'm not giving it much thought, they'll just pop in there.

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