Not Very Polished

A crude young fellow from upstate New York He never learned to handle a fork He jabbed at his food In fact, he was quite rude And he behaved like a back country dork.
Written May 29, 2022 10/10/6/6/10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 4:08 AM
I kind of like the back county dorks; prefer them to the pompous arrogant non back country dorks.
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Oh my, yes. I totally agree. I was a back country dork when I was a kid. Soooo naive, you wouldn't believe it. I was smart in some ways, so dumb in others.
Connelly Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 12:02 PM
L Milton you are doing limericks proud. Another laugh out loud from me jajaja. Thus the invention of the "spork". Thanks again...
Connelly Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 8:57 PM
So true IS true creation. I imagine it's like giving birth without complications. Easy breathing & NO pushing. It just plops out...
Hankins Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Thanks so much, Jeff. When I try to write a good one, it just won't come. When I'm not giving it much thought, they'll just pop in there.
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