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Not Too Old For Balloons

February is her enchanted month a time of birthday songs and refrains, when an added year is but a number so, what is her secret dream for today? Whipping pasta and cake on a quiet evening, strains of ‘Moonlight Serenade’ whistles.. then comes a knocking, her group of friends, surprising her with rows of colored helium, prisms of yellow, pink and red giant balloons gathering around her in bouncing relay! Laughter rolls as they pop colored orbs till everyone sings for her life’s wish- upon star… from out on the porch, a flurry of balloons is released… soaring for cheered returns of days. She keeps one zeppelin with a freckled skin, to remind her of this unforgettable time while moonbeams whisper high above, “You’re not alone;” her eyes misty like night-dew. 1/27/2016 Birthday Party Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron ------------- ~ To my dear AUNT MIMS on her forthcoming 70th birthday. She lives with a 'weekend' sister and two dogs~
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February 11, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Nette, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
Grammatico Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Well done, Nette. I particularly liked your second stanza.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:30 AM
Great pen nette... congrats on ur awesome win!
Gentry Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:34 PM
I love the memory :-) Congratulations on your win!!!
Canerdy Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:20 PM
How lovely, Nette! Congrats on your win. Janice
Turner Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:11 PM
As usual, Nette, a very touching write. Well penned. Congratulations on taking top spot.
May Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Wonderful write Nette...Congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Nor for cake and all the trimmings. Congratulations on a great poem. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:04 PM
God Bless your Aunt Mims....and may her birthday be as beautiful as her joy! Well done, Nette !! Lovely poem!
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:20 PM
A delightful poem Nette I hope she had a wonderful day:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Nette
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Nette, I remember when I made a party for my grandma, where I made it like a children party because this her request as she said she never experienced one, delightful poem Nette!!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Delaney Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Love the whimsy for your dear Aunt Mims, She will love your words as a keepsake. The last line is beautiful. SyZ
Callus Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 12:08 PM
How lovely and nice of you Nette to dedicate this delightful poem to your aunt! Wishing her all the very best on her birthday (mine's in Feb, too!) hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:07 AM
- A lovely party :) - Good luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sage Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 5:10 PM
simply beautiful...the imagery's thrilling too, excellent write Nette
Smith Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 4:44 PM
so lovely to have a close family nette...sounds fun
Parker Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Your Aunt Mims is blest..good luck in the contest
Turner Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM
I'm nearing the age of your aunt and I've never had a birthday party with balloons. Sounds like fun. I always did like popping them. Congrats to you for the poem and for your aunt on her 70th.
Paras Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Balloons are for the young and old; I feel this awesome poem keeps your aunt bubbly and youthful! Bless her and you. Belated happy birthday!
Carroll Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Awesome write Nette.. Forever young!
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