Not Too Late

Wednesday afternoon
                                            Blue fruits from the trial
                                          Smacks and hacks for sure
                                          Learning do from failure
                                         Learn from yesterday,live today,hope for tomorrow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Moore Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 1:01 PM
I like the last line, Janet...good job! Hugs, Holly
Widjanarko Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Nice life lessons Janet, I enjoyed your tanka this morning:) and thank you for visiting my page, it's been a pleasure :D- hug, Yanny
Angel-Simon Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 8:58 AM
Great work Janet! bravo.. Love... Angel
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 10:03 AM
Words of wisdom Janet, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Muthoni Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 6:53 AM
thanks Lise
Williams Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 8:09 AM
janet there is always hope..David
Muthoni Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 8:17 AM
definitely
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