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Alone on a hill- Afternoon end of summer; Dark clouds piling-up.

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Amber Plocica

Date: 7/23/2009 10:01:00 AM

It might seem bad to you, but i think its a small haiku, with A LOT of talent! Keep it up! I'm 11 just to let you know, and im new here, also! It smells like a winner to me! =)

Amber Plocica

Date: 7/23/2009 9:58:00 AM

Maybe you think it's bad or something like that, but i dont know anyone else with your talented personality! I'm 11, just so you know, and im new here too!LOL! and i love your poem, because it smells like a winner to me! =)

James Fraser

Date: 7/21/2009 11:12:00 AM

Kool Haiku Anita, love the way you laid it, Soup Mail for you>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2009 10:12:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Anita. I think I would have titled it The Coming Of Fall. Welcome to PoetrySoup.

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/20/2009 10:29:00 PM

grat haiku. check out some of my poems