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Just three small changes a full stop and question Mark after maybe that's so, removing a comma added An apostrophe On know at line end full stop & apostrophe After 'escape me' 22 12 2021
Our earth rotates with a wobbly spin.. could that be Indicative of the presence of sin? Not perfect yet living Maybe that's so.? yet here's another truth many won't know' A ball of Release was created and run where the sun Starts to shine, while in the earth's north; there is none' Reports from dead media, deny it was done.? Yet I saw so many all enjoying their fun, it was titled For freedom though to close it some tried, For to smile is now frowned on; and no singing inside.' Like the scouring of 'the shire' in the Lord of the rings How could it happen? In tightening things.? Fear was It's trigger; as deadly claims just grew bigger In their 70 and 80s people's actions escape me.! They'll do the mask-task, but ever do they ask? How they lived to this good age.? Were their mothers So.. Unsage.? I'm sure they would cry if all this came To their eyes.' This insult to good reason cap's The silliest of seasons.!

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Date: 1/8/2022 1:00:00 PM
Above zero here t'day finally Joe (headin' back down t'morrow) m n' ma don't watch much news, seems to always b cycli'n a dystopian world, mostly ewtn with Raymond Arroyo on Thursday nites, we like him...all we can do is reach out to family members in need, my niece is a chg nurse at the "gang body drop hospital" in town, coupled with covid cases, such stress is mind-boggling for her, we bring her family hot dinners and such to ease her burden and show support, cuz' she's barely survivin'
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/8/2022 1:38:00 PM
Soup mail me her name James I will pray for her, and get her On a prayer list with the churches I know.' Thank you for Your visit'
Date: 12/22/2021 10:50:00 AM
Indeed hope for better days. Happy holidays
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/22/2021 12:05:00 PM
Hi Pashang, it's always good To hear from your talented Self.' In my estimation your Art exceeds your physical Presence' not that I've met you Yet so it seems to me as I Consider.'
Date: 12/19/2021 9:53:00 AM
I totally get this , Joe. Too bad people can't' just trust their common sense.
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Date: 12/19/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I understand the Pressures that were exerted Though; only a little information Coming through in early 2020 But that was a managed thing I See now' we can only do our Best to warn people God Knows.'