Not So Fast

Do days become shorter?
The older we get
The hours fly by
Like a high-flying jet

we move slower
As slow as a snail
Our energy's lower
so why is it how

The days go past
So fast

Perhaps it's because
We are deep in thought,
And forget to do
The things we ought

As our minds
Leave responsibilities behind
As we dream of a world
Of a different kind

Time stands still
Or so it seems
While we mull over
Hopes and dreams

Of our future
And our past
Time is our enemy
Our clock is ticking, fast

Another day has gone,
We look around
What have we done

We have visited many places,
See old relatives smiling faces
Sung and danced in fields of corn
Experienced the joys of our newborn

Love and loss, laughter and tears
Giving support to each other through the years
Strained relationships and grief
Lasting friendships others brief

Passion and compassion seen
Like stories on a movie screen
We have to take the good and the bad
And feel happy and sometimes sad

Doesn't every day go fast,
When we view it through a looking glass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 6:53 AM
You speak for us all with this superb poem on life and aging. You reach the depths, Shirley.
Hawkins Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 7:54 PM
AAAW! Heartfelt thanks for your lovely comments, Vijay. I appreciate them very much. Take care, Shirley
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Wonderful, reflective piece, Shirley. Profound thoughts about the passage of time here. Thank you for sharing it. Magical Moments, Gershon
Hawkins Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 7:55 PM
WOW! Thank you, Gershon
Buhagiar Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 3:09 AM
At the moment I still feel pain from my accident, but things will improve. But not the length of time. Lovely poem.
Hawkins Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 7:43 PM
What happened to you Victor? I am so sorry to hear that you have had an accident. I hope you are enjoying a pain free day today and you will recover completely soon. Thank you for your comments, Look after yourself, Shirley
Roper Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:26 PM
Shirley , you have describe everything I have thought of. Blessings my dear
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June 11, 2023 at 7:42 PM
Shirley l think this is a truly “brilliant” poem….it speaks volumes about life and aging! I absolutely love this one! Debx Soupmail!
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