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Not So Fast

Do days become shorter? The older we get The hours fly by Like a high-flying jet we move slower As slow as a snail Our energy's lower so why is it how The days go past So fast Perhaps it's because We are deep in thought, And forget to do The things we ought As our minds Leave responsibilities behind As we dream of a world Of a different kind Time stands still Or so it seems While we mull over Hopes and dreams Of our future And our past Time is our enemy Our clock is ticking, fast Another day has gone, We look around What have we done We have visited many places, See old relatives smiling faces Sung and danced in fields of corn Experienced the joys of our newborn Love and loss, laughter and tears Giving support to each other through the years Strained relationships and grief Lasting friendships others brief Passion and compassion seen Like stories on a movie screen We have to take the good and the bad And feel happy and sometimes sad Doesn't every day go fast, When we view it through a looking glass.

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Date: 6/13/2023 6:53:00 AM
You speak for us all with this superb poem on life and aging. You reach the depths, Shirley.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/13/2023 7:54:00 PM
AAAW! Heartfelt thanks for your lovely comments, Vijay. I appreciate them very much. Take care, Shirley
Date: 6/12/2023 8:12:00 PM
Wonderful, reflective piece, Shirley. Profound thoughts about the passage of time here. Thank you for sharing it. Magical Moments, Gershon
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/13/2023 7:55:00 PM
WOW! Thank you, Gershon
Date: 6/12/2023 3:09:00 AM
At the moment I still feel pain from my accident, but things will improve. But not the length of time. Lovely poem.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 6/12/2023 7:43:00 PM
What happened to you Victor? I am so sorry to hear that you have had an accident. I hope you are enjoying a pain free day today and you will recover completely soon. Thank you for your comments, Look after yourself, Shirley
Date: 6/11/2023 10:26:00 PM
Shirley , you have describe everything I have thought of. Blessings my dear
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Date: 6/11/2023 7:42:00 PM
Shirley l think this is a truly “brilliant” poem….it speaks volumes about life and aging! I absolutely love this one! Debx Soupmail!
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