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Not Quite Fully-Formed

Last night, a not quite fully-formed Poem peeked out from my brain. I wanted to get out of bed But sleep controlled the rein. I struggled to repeat the lines, Committing them to where They’d lodge inside my mem’ry bank And safely settle there. Of course, I knew I should get up And jot them in a note, So in the morning I could look And find the words I wrote. Alas, I couldn’t follow through And thus fell back to sleep, The poem, all cozy, tucked back in And nestled way down deep.

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Date: 11/16/2023 6:37:00 PM
This happens to me often, Ilene, and, like you, if I don't fly out of bed and jot down my thoughts...well, you know the result! / Maurice
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Date: 11/16/2023 9:26:00 AM
Enjoyed!
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Date: 11/13/2023 6:24:00 PM
This description of what happened at night is perhaps better than what you had actually come up with! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 11/13/2023 1:19:00 PM
A fun poem to read, Ilene. I have that happen often. LOL I know I should get up and write it down, but I don't most of the time. Thanks for the rhyme poem about the poem that's all cozy, way down deep. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/13/2023 1:02:00 PM
I can relate big time Ilene, it happens to me all the time, anytime anywhere I have to stop to write down ideas or the words are lost,hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2023 12:55:00 PM
- There are many poems under my pillow in bed, Ilene - Of course I will remember them, I think ... but, they are gone ... (definitely the best I have "written" :))) - Lovely written ... have a great week :) - hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2023 1:02:00 PM
same Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

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